Email Sequence Writing

Create high-converting email sequences optimized for maximum open rates, click-throughs, and conversions using direct response principles from Gary Halbert, Frank Kern, and Mike Filsaime. Every email should feel like a personal message from a trusted friend who genuinely wants to help.

Primary Objective

Create email sequences that:

• Maximize open rates through compelling subject lines

• Build genuine connection and trust with subscribers

• Drive action at strategic moments with clear CTAs

• Convert subscribers into customers through strategic persuasion

• Include a PS section in EVERY email to reinforce urgency or value

Mandatory Email Elements (Per Mike Filsaime)

1. Subject Line & Preview

• Craft compelling subject lines designed for maximum open rate

• Include personalization with {first_name} when beneficial

• Complement with an engaging preview snippet that expands curiosity

2. Email Length

• Write to the ideal length required for maximum impact

• Long or short as necessary—do not force brevity or extend unnecessarily

• Every word must earn its place

3. Conversational Tone

• Adopt a friendly, approachable, persuasive, and natural tone

• Inspired by legendary marketers Gary Halbert, Frank Kern, and Mike Filsaime

• Write as if speaking to one person, not a list

4. Formatting & Style

• 3-5 lines maximum per paragraph (mandatory)

• Use markdown: bold, italics, and underline for impact

• Use ellipses (...) occasionally for conversational transitions

• Include subheadings to guide readers smoothly when appropriate

5. Bullet Points (FAB Structure)

• Integrate bullet points following implicit Feature-Advantage-Benefit structure

• Clearly convey value, leading readers toward the "promised land"

• Naturally bridge features to ultimate benefits without saying "Feature, Advantage, Benefit"

6. Call to Action (CTA)

• Place clear, compelling CTAs strategically throughout

• Each CTA should prime readers for the next step

• Include multiple CTAs if it enhances message flow

7. Visual Elements

• Indicate image placements with [Place Supported Image Here]

• Place at natural points to support engagement

8. Personalization & Sign-off

• End every email with {first_name} personalization where appropriate

• Close with warm signature from brand owner

9. PS Section (MANDATORY)

• Include a PS at the end of EVERY email

• Reinforce urgency, scarcity, or exclusivity

• The PS should contain an additional strong call to action

• The PS is the second-most read part of any email (after subject line)

Core Email Sequence Types

Welcome Series (3-7 Emails)

Purpose: Onboard new subscribers, set expectations, and build strong relationship foundation.

Trigger: Immediately after opt-in

Email 1 (Day 0): Immediate Welcome

• Confirm opt-in and express genuine excitement

• Set expectations: frequency, content types, value

• Deliver immediate quick win or insight

• Personalize with {first_name} throughout

Email 2 (Day 1): Value Delivery

• Deliver on lead magnet promise

• Share story or insight that builds connection

• Introduce your approach or philosophy

Email 3 (Day 2-3): Connection Building

• Share personal story or mission

• Build relatability and trust

• Show vulnerability and authenticity

Email 4 (Day 3-4): Education

• Teach something valuable

• Provide actionable insight or framework

• Demonstrate expertise without selling

Email 5 (Day 4-5): Community

• Invite to community or resources

• Build sense of belonging

• Set stage for ongoing relationship

Nurture Sequence (Evergreen)

Purpose: Maintain long-term engagement through consistent value delivery.

Content Mix:

• 70% pure value (no selling)

• 20% soft value with subtle awareness

• 10% direct offers (for engaged segments)

Segmentation Approach:

• Behavior-based: opens, clicks, purchases

• Interest-based: content preferences

• Lifecycle-based: new vs. long-term

Value Types:

• Educational insights and frameworks

• Inspirational stories and case studies

• Actionable tips and strategies

• Behind-the-scenes content

Launch Sequence (5-8 Emails)

Purpose: Maximize sales during product launches through strategic persuasion.

Phase 1: Prelaunch (Emails 1-2)

• Build anticipation and curiosity

• Tease transformation and outcomes

• Create desire without revealing offer

Phase 2: Open (Email 3)

• Reveal offer with excitement

• Present full value proposition

• Stack value and benefits

• First conversion CTA

Phase 3: Objections (Emails 4-5)

• Address common concerns

• Handle price objections

• Overcome trust barriers

• Reinforce transformation

Phase 4: Urgency (Emails 6-7)

• Create genuine urgency

• Limited-time elements

• Final value reinforcement

Phase 5: Close (Email 8)

• Final emotional appeal

• Last chance messaging

• Strongest CTA

Winback Sequence (3-4 Emails)

Purpose: Re-engage inactive subscribers through value and incentives.

Email 1: Value Re-engagement

• Acknowledge absence without guilt

• Deliver immediate value

• Soft invitation to re-engage

Email 2: Understanding

• Ask why they disengaged

• Show you value feedback

• Offer incentive for response

Email 3: Incentive

• Meaningful offer to return

• Limited-time opportunity

• Strong CTA

Email 4: Final (Optional)

• Final value delivery

• Respect their decision

• Leave door open

Writing Standards

Subject Line Formulas

Curiosity-Driven:

• "The [thing] nobody talks about..."

• "Why [common approach] fails..."

• "I made a mistake..."

Value-Driven:

• "Here's [specific outcome]"

• "[Number] ways to [result]"

• "The [method] that changed everything"

Personal:

• "A quick thought on [topic]"

• "Something I noticed..."

• "{first_name}, quick question"

Urgency-Driven:

• "Last 24 hours..."

• "This ends tonight"

• "Final reminder: [offer]"

Email Structure

Opening:

• Hook in first line

• Personal and conversational

• Create immediate interest

Body:

• One main idea per email

• Short paragraphs (3-5 lines max)

• Stories that make a point

• Clear value or insight

CTA:

• One primary action

• Clear and specific

• Benefit-driven language

• Multiple placements for long emails

Closing:

• Warm sign-off

• Personal signature

• PS for emphasis (most-read after subject line)

Tone Guidelines

• Conversational and personal

• Write to ONE person

• Authentic and relatable

• Confident but not arrogant

• Value-focused, not sales-focused (except launch)

Examples

Welcome Email (Day 0)

Subject: You're in! Here's your [Lead Magnet Name]

Hey {first_name},

Welcome to the family! 🎉

I'm genuinely excited you're here.

Before anything else, here's what you came for:

👉 [DOWNLOAD YOUR FREE GUIDE HERE]

Now, a quick heads up on what to expect from me:

Every Tuesday and Thursday, I'll drop into your inbox with:

• Actionable strategies you can implement immediately
• Behind-the-scenes insights from real campaigns
• The occasional story that might make you laugh (or cry)

I don't do fluffy, generic advice.

Everything I share comes from 10+ years of testing, failing, and finally figuring out what actually works.

Quick question: What's the #1 thing you're struggling with right now?

Just hit reply and tell me. I read every response.

Talk soon, [Name]

P.S. - Check your inbox tomorrow. I've got something special that's helped 1,000+ people [achieve result]. You're gonna love it.

Launch Email (Cart Open)

Subject: It's here. [Product Name] is now open.

{first_name},

The wait is over.

[Product Name] is officially open for enrollment.

But before I share all the details, let me ask you something:

What would change if you could [specific outcome] in the next 90 days?

→ More [benefit 1]? → Less [pain point]? → Finally [aspiration]?

That's exactly what [Product Name] is designed to do.

Here's what you get:

✅ [Module 1]: [Outcome] (Value: $XXX) ✅ [Module 2]: [Outcome] (Value: $XXX) ✅ [Module 3]: [Outcome] (Value: $XXX) ✅ BONUS: [Bonus Name] (Value: $XXX)

Total Value: $X,XXX

Your Investment Today: $XXX

[👉 CLICK HERE TO ENROLL NOW]

This is the same system that helped [social proof]:

• "[Testimonial quote 1]" - [Name]
• "[Testimonial quote 2]" - [Name]

Doors close [Date] at midnight.

After that, you'll have to wait until [timeframe] for the next enrollment window.

Don't let this one slip by.

[👉 YES, I'M READY TO [OUTCOME]]

To your success, [Name]

P.S. - Still have questions? Reply to this email or check out the full FAQ here: [link]

Winback Email

Subject: Did I do something wrong?

Hey {first_name},

I noticed you haven't opened my emails in a while.

No guilt trip—I get it. Inboxes are overwhelming.

But I wanted to check in and make sure you're still getting value from being here.

If you want to stick around, I've got something for you:

[Quick win, free resource, or exclusive content]

Just click here to grab it: [LINK]

If you'd rather part ways, no hard feelings at all. You can unsubscribe anytime using the link below.

But if you stay, I promise to keep earning your attention with stuff that actually helps.

Either way, I appreciate you.

[Name]

P.S. - If there's something specific you want me to write about, just reply and tell me. I'm always looking for ideas.

Guidelines

The Mike Filsaime Email Rules:

• PS is MANDATORY - Every single email ends with a PS

• 3-5 lines per paragraph - Never longer, break it up

• Ellipses for pacing - Use (...) to create conversational flow

• FAB bullets - Feature → Advantage → Benefit (implicit, never stated)

• [Place Supported Image Here] - Mark visual placement points

• {first_name} personalization - Use in subject lines and body strategically

Avoid Email Clichés:

• Never: "I hope this email finds you well"

• Never: "Just following up" as an opener

• Never: "As per my last email"

• Avoid: "Don't miss out!" (overused, triggers spam filters)

• Skip: "Dear valued subscriber" (impersonal)

Subject Line Rules:

• Keep under 50 characters for mobile

• Front-load the important words

• Use personalization ({first_name}) sparingly—max 1 per week

• Avoid ALL CAPS (spam trigger)

• Test emojis—they work for some audiences, not others

Formatting Standards (Mandatory):

• 3-5 lines maximum per paragraph - This is non-negotiable

• Use white space liberally between paragraphs

• One main CTA per email (can repeat it multiple times)

• Mobile-first: must look good on phone

• Use bold and italics for emphasis

Deliverability Hygiene:

• Avoid spam trigger words: "FREE!!!", "ACT NOW", "LIMITED TIME"

• Include physical address in footer

• Make unsubscribe easy to find

• Warm up new sending domains gradually

Voice & Tone (Gary Halbert / Frank Kern / Mike Filsaime Style):

• Write to ONE person, not a list

• Use "you" more than "I"

• Read it out loud—does it sound human?

• Be specific, not vague

• Have an opinion—don't be vanilla

• Tell stories that make a point

• Create emotional connection before asking for action

Timing Best Practices:

• Welcome email: within 5 minutes of opt-in

• Nurture: consistent day/time each week

• Launch: multiple emails during open/close windows

• Never send more than 2 emails in one day (except launch)

PS Section Requirements:

• Reinforce the main benefit or offer

• Create urgency or scarcity

• Include a CTA (link or instruction)

• Can repeat the guarantee

• Often the most-read part after subject line

Quality Checklist

For every email ask:

• Does this deliver genuine value?

• Would a subscriber feel smarter or inspired?

• Is the subject line compelling?

• Is the CTA clear and specific?

• Does this sound like a real person wrote it?

• Would I look forward to receiving this?

Additional Resources

Reference Files

• references/welcome-series.md

• Detailed welcome series templates and examples (3-7 email onboarding sequences)

• references/launch-sequence.md

• Complete launch sequence framework (5-8 email promotional campaigns)

• references/nurture-sequence.md

• Evergreen nurture content ideas (70/20/10 value mix, segmentation strategies)

• references/webinar-sequences.md

• Pre and post-webinar email sequences (invitation, reminder, no-show recovery, follow-up)

• references/affiliate-swipes.md

• Affiliate promotional email templates (ready-to-send swipe copy with personalization)

Write every email as if it's maintaining a valued friendship—thoughtful, meaningful, and worth their time.