1. Anti-Pattern Detection
Five diagnostic patterns that mark AI-generated research prose.
Hedging Soup
Stacking uncertainty markers drains every sentence of meaning.
| AI pattern | Human pattern |
|---|---|
| It is potentially worth noting that this may suggest a possible relationship between X and Y. | X correlates with Y (r = 0.43, p < .01), though the cross-sectional design limits causal inference. |
| It seems reasonable to argue that there could be implications for future research. | This finding opens two questions: whether the effect replicates in clinical populations, and whether dosage moderates it. |
Diagnostic: count hedging words (potentially, possibly, may, might, seems, could, arguably, perhaps) per paragraph. More than two in a single paragraph signals hedging soup. Replace stacked hedges with one precise statement of what is known and one precise statement of what limits that knowledge.
Formulaic Transitions
"Furthermore," "Moreover," "Additionally," "It is important to note that" — these words fill space where logic should be.
| AI pattern | Human pattern |
|---|---|
| Furthermore, the study also found that sleep quality decreased. Moreover, participants reported higher anxiety. Additionally, cortisol levels were elevated. | Sleep quality decreased. Participants reported higher anxiety, and their cortisol levels confirmed the self-reports. |
| It is important to note that these findings have implications. | [Delete the sentence. Start with the implications.] |
Diagnostic: scan for Furthermore/Moreover/Additionally/It is important to note/It is worth mentioning/Interestingly. If any appear, ask whether the logical relationship is already clear from sentence order. If yes, delete the transition. If no, replace with the actual relationship (but, because, so, despite, after).
Structural Monotony
Every paragraph follows the same template: topic sentence, three supporting points of equal weight, summary sentence. Real academic writing varies its rhythm.
| AI pattern | Human pattern |
|---|---|
| [Topic sentence]. [Point A]. [Point B]. [Point C]. [Summary sentence]. [Repeat for next paragraph.] | A short paragraph making one sharp claim. Then a longer passage that develops an argument across six or seven sentences, weaving evidence with interpretation. Then two sentences that pivot to a complication. |
Diagnostic: map paragraph lengths across a section. If more than three consecutive paragraphs fall within 10 words of each other, restructure. Vary paragraph length by at least 30%. Mix single-claim paragraphs with multi-sentence analytical passages.
Abstraction Fog
Categories and generalities where specifics belong.
| AI pattern | Human pattern |
|---|---|
| Various studies have explored this topic using different methodologies. | Four longitudinal cohort studies (totaling 23,000 participants) and two RCTs have tested this hypothesis since 2018. |
| This has important implications for the field. | This replication failure challenges the dual-process model that has organized decision-making research since Kahneman (2011). |
| Researchers have investigated this phenomenon in multiple contexts. | Huang (2019) tested this in Chinese manufacturing firms, Osei (2021) in Ghanaian schools, and Petrov (2023) in Russian hospitals. |
Diagnostic: search for "various," "different," "multiple," "numerous," "important," "significant" (non-statistical), "the field," "the literature." Each one is a prompt to substitute a specific name, number, or concrete referent.
Voice Erasure
The writer disappears behind passive constructions and impersonal phrases, even when the discipline expects authorial presence.
| AI pattern | Human pattern |
|---|---|
| It can be argued that this framework is insufficient. | We argue this framework is insufficient. |
| The data were analyzed using thematic analysis. | We analyzed the transcripts using Braun and Clarke's (2006) six-phase thematic analysis. |
| It is suggested that future research should examine this. | Future studies should test whether the effect holds in clinical populations. |
Diagnostic: count instances of "it can be," "it is suggested," "it was found," "it should be noted." Replace each with the actual agent performing the action. In the sciences and social sciences, first person plural is standard. In the humanities, first person singular. Know the convention for the target discipline.
2. Discipline-Aware Register
Academic writing conventions vary by field. Adjust register to the target discipline.
- Sciences (STEM): Concise, method-focused, passive voice acceptable for methods sections, active voice for argumentation. Numbered hypotheses. Statistical reporting follows APA or field-specific standards.
- Social Sciences: Balance of active and passive voice. First person plural standard. Theoretical framing expected in introductions. Effect sizes alongside p-values.
- Humanities: First person singular common. Longer analytical paragraphs. Close reading and interpretive argument valued. Direct engagement with other scholars' positions.
- Interdisciplinary: Default to active voice with first person plural. Define terms from each contributing field. Bridge jargon gaps explicitly.
3. Citation Integration
How sources enter sentences matters as much as which sources you cite.
- Narrative citation when the author's identity matters: "Foucault (1975) argued that..."
- Parenthetical citation when the finding matters more than who found it: "Incarceration rates tripled between 1980 and 2000 (Alexander, 2010)."
- Direct quotation only when the original wording is the point: a key definition, a contested phrase, a striking formulation. Never quote to avoid paraphrasing.
- Synthesis citation to show consensus or disagreement: "Several studies confirm this pattern (Lee, 2019; Nakamura, 2020; dos Santos, 2021), though one found no effect in adolescents (Byrne, 2022)."
When producing any research prose, follow this sequence:
- Identify the discipline and audience. Adjust register, citation style, and voice conventions accordingly.
- Draft with specificity. Name studies, methods, sample sizes, years. Replace every "various studies" and "the literature suggests" with concrete referents during drafting, not after.
- Vary structure deliberately. Before writing each paragraph, choose its shape: single-claim, multi-evidence analytical, pivot-to-complication, or narrative-of-debate. Do not repeat the same shape for three consecutive paragraphs.
- Use transitions only for actual logical relationships. If deleting a transition word doesn't change the meaning, delete it.
- Self-audit before presenting. Run these five checks against the completed draft:
Self-Audit Checklist
- Hedging: Fewer than two hedging words per paragraph. Every uncertainty is expressed through evidence ("3 of 5 studies") not through stacked qualifiers.
- Transitions: Zero instances of Furthermore/Moreover/Additionally/It is important to note. Every remaining transition expresses contrast, cause, consequence, or concession.
- Structure: No three consecutive paragraphs within 10 words of each other in length. At least two different paragraph shapes per section.
- Specificity: Zero instances of "various studies," "the literature," "multiple contexts," "important implications" without a concrete referent following within the same sentence.
- Voice: Fewer than three instances of "it can be," "it is suggested," "it was found" per page. First person used where discipline permits.
If any check fails, revise before presenting the output.
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